Where is my beret, we’re going French!

I found out today, that someone picked my story up to translate it into French. I’m serious, we’re going French! Here is the page, it’s a website full of French translations of JP novels, so mine standing next to it is seriously awesome, though the real job will start in August. However, the prologue and chapter 1-1 are already finished!

Thx Douglas Mikail for making this, I’m proud as an ox right now. Also added another page above to link to foreign versions to the story, even if it’s unlikely to get there… though I’ve never considered it being translated into French either. Maybe I should look if I can find the time to make a German version as well…

Also, I’ve also updated now the RRL-version of volume 1 completely.

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Volume 01 REWORKED

Hey guys, I’m finished, the whole volume 1 has been reworked and posted, though I’ll still need to make the last few changes on RRL. The final bits were chapter 4, the epilogue, the extras, and the afterword.

Finally, this is something I wanted to do for a while, and I also like to do Volume 2 one day (though this might be far away, considering that I’m not as far with the new stuff as I want to be right now). With this, the first-time readers will have less of a heart attack when reading the early bits of the story.

Would I do things differenty nowadays? Of course, my writing improves (I hope), my idea of the story is better framed, but I’m still proud at the work I’ve done. The moment I may actually redo things is the moment I decided to give a premium version a try.

Like before, I share the pics with you, this time it’s two status pages at the end (which becomes a staple starting with volume 3) and a black/white-illustration. MioChin actually panicked about drawing them kiss, but after some conversation, we found things he feels more comfortable with… but I will force him one day to make a kiss-illustration… oops, spoiler! 😛

Chapter 4-2

Katsuragi Kenta Pikeman Level 38 (Epilogue)

Momokawa Kyou Priest Level 20 (Epilogue)

I like to thank the people of the now closed DRAFT-group for their help with the edits, also Orion Dye, who does the PR for me now despite being a Patron for finishing where they left off. Thanks you a bunch guys!

I also might try making a .pdf or E-book-file for the volumes, will try if I can do it, when I want to work, but can’t write for whatever reason. 😉

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Volume 05 – Chapter 4-3

Last time, the old beggar said that he punches the air so hard that it explodes! This time, some things are cleared, some are thrown into more confusion!

Instead of editing the Extra 1, I added something else, and continued writing alpha-drafts, though I plan to finally start today… but Evenicle is distracting me, as it has some similarities to my story (man going on adventure and getting several wives on the way, just that they like him; mature content included).

Next time, the end of the chase!

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Volume 05 – Chapter 4-2

That the air does what!? … Well, next part is up, the last bit os one of my favorites, I just needed to read it just now again.

This week, I have finished making a beta-draft of the non-canonical extra and I hope to have time tomorrow to polish it. Today I unnecessarily played way to long a new game I got, really messed up my timetable, that’s also why I release this part so late… in the future, I should make alarms before I start playing.

Next time, she comes and saves the day.

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Volume 05 – Chapter 4-1

The pursuit continues, the girls also begin joining the fray. A big chaos is ensured, while Kenta has to deal with a nasty ally, who’s hard to predict and ready to rumble! But their enemies also aren’t a sole unit, it’s fair in this regard at least.

Have finished my SAO-research for the Extra, now I need to implement them in the basic structure of the alpha-draft. I’ve also found some other points Kenta might criticise at SAO, but having too much is too much as well. So next week, next week I may be finished with it and can give it to PRing. My Patreons will rejoice! The others as well, just later. 😉

Next time, the hunt continues and some other people are partaking in it.

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Volume 01 – Chapter 2 – REWORKED

Back to some reworked stuff, the entirety of the second chapter of volume 1 has been reworked, including adding an illustration and a status page. Like I said, for you I include this stuff in the posts.

Making the edits takes longer than expected, as DRAFT didn’t copied the first part of chapter 2-2 and I had to look where I had it. First I thought it was my mistake with a bad marking error, until I looked up their copies… Well, everything’s here! Just may need to look at that part myself soon to find all the faults. ^^’

Chapter 2-2

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Volume 05 – Chapter 3-4

Here we are, the final part of chapter 3! With more enemies, you start appreciating any potential allies more. Kenta is

Well, first Extra is still laying low for me to get some mental distance to it. Also need to research SAO-base story once more, have some XXXs where I didn’t know a name or a number. Still, hope to polish it next week and put it on Patreon.

Also got a fast chibi when I looked at some of the design drafts for the next volume. Should I ask MioChin to make more of them when he has time?

Next time, we look at how Kenta faces the people, who are right in a sense, while he’s also right to want to stay alive, which makes it a right vs. right situation, while the wrong is doing nothing, hiding in plain sight…

 

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Volume 1 – Chapter 1-2 REWORKED

Hey guys, after catching up to many things I missed while I was on the convention, I was finally able to update the next of the old chapters. Nothing too fancy here, but nonetheless a needed step. Will most likely pick up the pace starting next week, though I’ll add some status-pages in addition to MioChin’s illustrations.

Then when stuff comes around, I’ll also add other status-pages. Of course you’re gonna be up-to-date, I’ll post everything image-related here.

On another note, whenever I re-read anything I’ve written, especially that early in my writing “career”, my heart is aching and I have the desire to rewrite it entirely, though I should be proud of it, as it kickstarted everything… Hope that I can keep this rewrite-mentality for the day I may want to see my work on paper, and have the time and will to make it happen. 😉

Kenta drawn by Dorothee Wittstock

Hey guys, I’m back from the convention and I brought you something, an artwork from fantasy illustrator Dorothee Wittstock. I asked for a more realistic version of a character and she chose Kenta. 😉

Kenta drawn by Dorothee Wittstock

Still, there is something wrong here. Can any of you tell me what? 😀