Volume 01 – Chapter 4-2

And here it is, the second of three parts of the fourth chapter. It’s a bit bloody and altered a bit from the first draft, lengthening the fight a bit, to show a bit more of desperation.

I’m not that satisfied with this part, since I hit my limits in terms of language hard, so really: If someone is willing to edit it, to make false English right, please contact me. -_-‘

I don’t now, if I can ready the next part this weekend. This would conclude chapter 4, only leaving the epilogue of the main-story of the first volume.  For the content… karma. 😉

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